i think thу poem is beautiful! the only line i can't put up with is about the fit of the shoes. if the fit is anything but perfect you can't call it a factor as soon as you really run hard road-surface. it is the very truth, far above your cardio-vascular health.
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Date: 2006-02-07 05:13 am (UTC)the only line i can't put up with is about the fit of the shoes. if the fit is anything but perfect you can't call it a factor as soon as you really run hard road-surface. it is the very truth, far above your cardio-vascular health.