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Keith Carter

Keith: Nice Try Focus is on Wrong End of horse obviously!! The square
is hard to compose in, dont fell too bad. Sometimes we Fotographers
have to take what we get. Bob

Irving Penn

Hi Irv, I don't know what you were thinking here dude! You got a pretty
model (altho kind of old), but you have caught her with her eyes cloes
in a not very good pose. Biggest problem is YOU NEED CROP to a
vertical!!!!! Backdrop is too small and there is not enough of a sweep
so you can see the crease. If you send me a file I can fix it in
Photoshop and I can give you my suggested crop. If you don't care
aboout your PROFESSIONALISM you are never going to get work as a pro
believe me!!! Hope I am not being too harsh. Oh well best regards
anyway, M.H.

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