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[vriad_lee]

тоже from-long-ago

ты ли девушка моя
с длинною косой
на лужайке у пруда
в полдень золотой
грелась, ножки подобрав
и глядела вглубь
где у илистого дна
словно круглый рубь
молодой карась сверкал
лунной чушуей
и играя забавлял
тихий разум твой

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[vriad-lee.livejournal.com]

well, i was making fun of you, it's not jewish. but if call stealing one word (long) stealing, then call me a stealer by all means. you see, i was telling about a long braid in my poem, not a long ROAD!

[stillcarl.livejournal.com]

Ah, not Jewish.

And apologies for hi-jacking the thread. It possibly has got a bit off-topic...

[vriad-lee.livejournal.com]

wait, i don't know - it might be jewish just as well