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[vriad_lee]

i know it's half-baked and maybe doesn't even make sense, but just to get rid of it, just to get rid of it, because i won't stop editing until i actually post. i got rid of another one already thanks to the magic of email, and now this one. goodbye. be well. drink you milk eat your pudding suck your jelly-fish brush your teeth et cetera

shooldays by moi


going up those steps
losing a sandal
pressed by the multitude
shouted at
in the morning
first grade
crouching
to get it back
how i learnt
to hate my sandals,
my feet, and myself
that and previous,
following days

Comments

[poemtree.livejournal.com]

but the half-baked poems are the best ones. i mean, at least bukowski thought so.

[stillcarl.livejournal.com]

Hmmm. Do kids go barefoot in Russia? (Meaning by choice, and not just at the beach.)

[emma-loy.livejournal.com]

soooper!
i felt the 6th school stairs under my feet as in a flash... this one's really GOOD